Wordiness
Using more words than needed.
Scientific manuscripts often present complex information. Being able to describe concepts clearly, with simple and direct language, is essential for the acceptance of your submission.
Wordiness, also known as verbosity, is when you use more words than needed. Your reader will need more time to read and might get confused.
Examples of verbosity:
- Using more words than strictly needed
(“based on the fact that” instead of “because”) - Choosing complicated words over simple words.
(“caveat” instead of “warning”) - Explaining more than needed
(“white snow” instead of “snow”) - Adding unneeded adjectives.
(“very excellent” instead of “excellent)
Download the poster for the complete list of wordiness instances you should avoid in your manuscript.